Feedback for Essay R

I would say that the author of this essay needs to have more facts about wrestling in the 80's. I thought that it was going to be a compare/contrast paper on the 80's vs. now about professional wrestling, but all the author did was exlain how much better the wrestlers are now. There needs to be more background information about professionaly wrestling period because the author wrote in a way that only someone who knew about wrestling would understand. There are alot of grammar issues from the changing of the point of view because you do not understand who is saying what and why. The paper is set up in a way that he is trying to say anything to make professional wrestling in the present so much better, which leaves out the 80's era of wrestling again. However, I was interested in the paper and I believe that the author had a lot of good ideas, but it needs to be more organized.